The Jellybane Chapter 4 Ready for Beta

After several days of personal editing, I believe  

 Chapter 4: The Hunt 

is ready for some Beta Readers!

In this chapter, Alice hunts jellies with her new companions, and in doing so, uncovers more of her new friends' mysterious pasts.

If you'd like to volunteer to be a beta reader, just send me your email

kjbaileyad@gmail.com

so I can send you the chapter. 

Previous chapters will be made available for catch up. 

Please do not distribute chapters without permission.

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Finished Chapter 4 and Now Editing - The Jellybane

Just Finished Chapter 4 of The Jellybane: The Hunt

I will now spend the next few days editing. After, I'll be looking for Beta Readers to help look the chapter over. If you'd like to volunteer some time, just send me your email, kjbaileyad@gmail.com

or post it in the comments so I can send you the most updated version of the chapter.

In Chapter 4, while hunting jellies with her new companions, Alice discovers tiny Twinkaleni has an enormous secret. In sharing, the strange pair take a great risk. Will they regret it? Or might Alice regret learning about it?

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The Jellybane Chapter 3 Now Available to Beta Readers

Hey guys, after a few days' editing, I believe Chapter 3: Among the Trees is now ready for a first round of Beta Readers.

 In this chapter, Alice begins her awaited expedition into the forest to hunt for rare colored jellies and their more valuable core stones. During her search she runs into two strangers. Needing cores in the hopes of replacing lost supplies, they propose a partnership with the young hunter. Clearly keeping much to themselves, Alice can only wonder what secrets the mysterious duo possess.

Beta Readers look over works of literature in order to offer feedback from the point of an average reader. They are invaluable for hammering out errors and smoothing the rough edges of stories so that the later completed work is all the better for the public.

If you'd like to volunteer to be a beta reader, just send your email to

 kjbaileyad@gmail.com 

so I can shoot you over a copy of the chapter. Earlier chapters will be made available for catching up. Please do not redistribute works without permission as they are not ready nor meant to be public yet.

Further support of Alice Dippleblack and other adventures is greatly appreciated and recieved via patreon at

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The Jellybane - Chapter 3 is in editing!

Chapter 3 is done!

In it, Alice meets Danahlia and Twinkaleni for the very first time. The liguna and merin, becoming desperate after losing their last supplies to the voracious jellies of the forest, strike a deal with the young hunter, forming a much needed partnership. Suspicious but eager for company on her solitary hunt, Alice seeks to learn more about the unusual pair. Who are they? Where did they come from? And why are they here?

I'll be editing the chapter over the next few days and will be looking for beta readers to help look it over. Those interested, please send your emails to me at 

kjbaileyad@gmail.com

or put them in the comments so I can send you copies.

If you need to catch up, let me know and I will send you the previous chapters.

 

If you're new to Alice Dippleblack 
and would like to know what I've been yammering on about for the last few years, here is a very brief summary:

Alice Dippleblack is a fantasy adventure series that takes place in a fantastical world of anthropomorphic animals, wondrous magic, and dangerous monsters. It predominately follows three orphans of vastly differing backgrounds in their struggle to survive in a land torn by war. Despite their differences, the trials the three endure together forge a bond that helps shape the future of their world.
 

 If you'd like to support more directly, please visit my patreon page for donation options and rewards:

www.patreon.com/kjbailey 

The Jellybane - Chapter 3 has begun!

I've begun writing Chapter 3 of The Jellybane's rewrite and am well into it. 

It's a very exciting chapter for me because in it Alice meets Danahlia and Twinkaleni for the very first time. I've wanted to change the details of how the indomitable trio met for a while and hope my new ideas are an improvement.

As always, I'd love to get feedback on my work, so if you have some time, this would be an excellent opportunity to get involved since we are still very early in the story.

The first two finished chapters will be made available to you if you send me your email, either to me directly at 'kjbaileyad@gmail.com' or by posting it in the comments.

The third and subsequent chapters will also be made available in this way. I'd like to make an attempt at publishing my work when it is done, so please keep these files to yourself. 

If, while reading, you come across something peculiar or have notes, feel encouraged to share with me. 

If you're new to Alice Dippleblack and would like to know what I've been yammering on about for the last few years, here is a very brief summary:

Alice Dippleblack is a fantasy adventure series that takes place in a fantastical world of anthropomorphic animals, wondrous magic, and dangerous monsters. It predominately follows three orphans of vastly differing backgrounds in their struggle to survive in a land torn by war. Despite their differences, the trials the three endure together forge a bond that helps shape the future of their world.

 If you'd like to support more directly, please visit my patreon page for donation options and rewards:

www.patreon.com/kjbailey